#WIPJoy Atmosphere

Phoenix Element: Reality Break is my latest work in progress (WIP). During the month of July, I’ll be giving a sneak peek into Reality Break.

(The words below are from a work in progress from the first draft of Reality Break.)


Kasiff finally speaks his thoughts. “I used to stand on top of the tallest building in Ferrian and just sit. I could watch the sun set. The sky would shine with orange and gold, more so than in the daytime.” He takes in a few deep breaths as he looks around the city that we are currently standing in.

“I could see all of the shacks, including mine. The lake would go on forever, teasing the sun. To the right of me, in the distance, stood the temple where I learned to be one with the Rayasha. It was a place of learning and sacrifice. All who lived there were there for the same reason. I never felt different but now that I reflect, I know, they were here.”

 “You mean the Rayasha?”

“Yes. I can feel their lingering presence.”

Kasiff touches the ground once again. I take a closer look at his hands, they are shaking slightly.


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Jennifer is a geek at heart. She works as a cook at a high end casino while trying to get her writing career off the ground. Jennifer has been writing off and on since the 5th grade. In her free time, Jennifer enjoys playing video games, reading, playing D&D, and listening to music.

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