#WIPJoy Emotion

Phoenix Element: Reality Break is my latest work in progress (WIP). During the month of July, I’ll be giving a sneak peek into Reality Break.

(The words below are from a work in progress from the first draft of Reality Break.)

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“Why don’t you ever listen to me?” There are tears welling up in his eyes.

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I fight the nagging urge to leave the room. My gut tells me to wait. He will be in this very room soon enough. My heart wants to teleport to every inch of the castle. I want to rip up every piece of wood and to throw every piece of stone until I have my hands on Zarnell.

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My left ankle goes sideways, causing me to lose my balance. I fall on my right hip. How long has my body been shaking?

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Even in the dim light I can see that Kasiff’s eyes are swollen. He failed. I can’t imagine what he is feeling right now. Is Kasiff equally furious as I am?

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